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Worse than the Moor

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Worse than the Moor

The pain is unbearable,
all that has been done-

Never trusted-
left in the dark, 
I’m in darkness now!

Forever lost in this abyss, 
everything is meaningless!

No end to the pain-
the heartaches...
though long broken, 
the hope thrust away!

Left to rot-

All is dark-
the soul dims-
it’s over the pain finally gone-
Death has come...

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  1. Date: 8/18/2012 9:49:00 PM
    Good write even though it is depressing to most folks.

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 6:41:00 PM
    //This is an older poem written a few years ago, just recently edited it for publishing I will be uploading more soon.

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 1:29:00 PM
    A very moving written poem - Yes, it is dark today..... tomorrow is a new will find love again. - Well written - - - be happy. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Martinez-Rivera Avatar Luis Martinez-Rivera
    Date: 8/16/2012 1:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oh i am, i havr a wonderful girlfriend and we've been together for over a year now.
  1. Date: 8/16/2012 12:56:00 AM
    Sad,very sad write.