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Worn-Out Dreams

worn-out dreams and briny tears hung upon the moon sorely borne from long-held fears they lit the night of June with silvered light of sour notes that echoed from her soul and fell as rain to lie in moats around the life he stole

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/1/2010 7:39:00 AM
Touching,very deep ,dear friend,Celene!
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Date: 6/29/2010 6:37:00 AM
So sad, so nicely written, Sharon! And thank you for your kind comments...:)..Gert
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Date: 6/27/2010 10:56:00 PM
Beautifully sad, Sharon. It must be about you! Break ups do that to a person! (inspire some great poetry, which is about all they are good for!) LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/27/2010 9:39:00 PM
Wonderful Poem, Sharon! And you hit the nail on the head with my Moon poem! I was going for werewolf!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/27/2010 6:00:00 PM
So sad, but beautifully written, Sharon. You are a true wordsmith. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/27/2010 4:55:00 PM
This is, indeed, beautiful! I put it to favorites, so I can read again. : )
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