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Words On Your Soul

I climbed into your world and sat.. I played music in your mind that wouldn't distract.. I stayed peacful and wrote words on your soul.. And then painted a picture that sang to the words that were told.. I'm the glow and warmth beside your heart.. I'm the dream that doesn't break apart.. If your alone and can't escape the shade.. Close your eyes and feel the words that stayed..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/23/2011 2:51:00 PM
This is a beautiful peice....keep up the atistic work. Thanks for your lovely comment :)
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Date: 10/3/2011 3:52:00 PM
a lovely invitation to hypnotize by these delightful intoxicating words penned so emotionally charged.. sweet sentiments Michael luv.. taking them to heart too.. xoxo..J.G..xoxo
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Date: 10/1/2011 8:17:00 PM
Tender words to make a girl want to hear more. I do close my eyes and hear the words that stayed! Just lovely
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Date: 10/1/2011 10:01:00 AM
Cool, Michael... I love every stanza of it...
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Date: 9/30/2011 7:14:00 PM
Yes, great writing is so soothing to the soul..Enjoyed reading this one very much..Thanks for your continued reading of my works..Sara
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Date: 9/30/2011 7:05:00 PM
Cute! Keep writing :)
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