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Words--The Heart of Imagination

Before twilight’s panels close the day, I sneak into this sacramental hallway fueling my pagan howls where I can be the raw-weed of a bush: a time when vignettes drain the floor--- spilling bones of my own pen, scratched and bent. Here, the vein bleeds of how I watched a pellet sun grate dusky leaves upon cobblestones, or why old man Stanley picked his regular bench in the park, talking to himself motionless as imaginings of verses run while the vivid language plays in my head. Brian Johnston's Contest Words---The Heart Of Imagination by nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/26/2014 7:29:00 PM
In awe again... Brilliant!
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Date: 11/25/2014 10:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Johnston's Contest "Words - The Heart of Imagination?"
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Date: 11/12/2014 11:32:00 PM
Awesome write Nette rich with creative imagery!
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Date: 11/12/2014 5:40:00 PM
Nette, I love this one very much. The imagery is enchanting. I believe too that you have The Winner here. Best of Luck -- and All the Best!! Cheers, Gary
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Date: 11/12/2014 3:30:00 PM
Love your imagination Princess. It leaves me breathless, as does a few other poets on the Soup. I must sit down one day and read, read, read and comment. Never stop writing, James :)
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Date: 11/12/2014 3:28:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 11/12/2014 1:20:00 PM
- Wonderful from start.... to the last word, dear Nette - Luck in contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/12/2014 12:39:00 PM
Wow Nette, another amazing poem. This sure looks like a winner to me.
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Date: 11/12/2014 9:03:00 AM
This is a delirious poem, rich with punchy metaphor in each line! Hope to write something like this, I'm jealous, Nette
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Date: 11/12/2014 8:23:00 AM
Intriguing with scenic lines tumbling on rails of imagination, Nette. Thank you for your latest feedback!
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Date: 11/12/2014 7:53:00 AM
What an opening! What an ending! What a marvelous verse from beginning to end, dear Nette! Good luck and a seven!
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