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Opening the door 
I let you in, 
The key 
you gave me 
Was a promise 
To never 
hurt me again 

I opened it 
Saying my kind of girl, 
Deceived I am by what
you done to me 
Deceit in the words 
you gave, 
your heartfelt words to me 
They are only words 

I love you 
To you maybe words, 
without any meaning why 
In my eyes 
you can draw a picture, 
without them 

You failed in keeping 
this door open 
Closing to your silence, 
unable to talk 
without words, 
The key jammed 
by your empty promises 
How do you talk 
from here 

It all ended 
with your silence 
To hurt someone 
my words, 
Believe you me 
The beginning in 
the End was all a lie 
My words to you 

You are wasted in words 
In the end, 
don't have 
any nice words 
For you 
How's that for words 

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  1. Date: 7/2/2015 4:28:00 AM
    no write awesome...learned a lot from you writing skills...:)

  1. Date: 8/28/2013 5:01:00 PM
    Wow, you certainly got that off your chest, good write Liam. thanks for the read....Peter

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 8/29/2013 7:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

  1. Date: 8/28/2013 3:43:00 PM
    I can feel the stirring emotions here Liam..Deceited by I love you words..and the end reveals pay baxk time.

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 8/28/2013 4:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    i feel no she will answer in the end karma has a funny you turn she will be a lonely old woman i see it coming by the way if you want a laugh do not enter the cheese monster ha ha wonderful comment thank you seetly deeply appreciated
    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 8/28/2013 3:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    back i meant oops