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Woot Woot Personal Memories Premiere Contest Winner

Woot Woot Personal Memories Monorhyme Form Jeremy, a teen, is baby sitting his siblings. They swallow him up playing. Berry sits on big brothers lap giggling in the big comfy chair sinking feeling, while tightly squeezing, Ella’s enjoying. Admiration of big brother’s loving. Frankie and Joey, watching, role-playing, Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles winning. Michelangelo’s, stealth bomber punching, Donatello’s, Chi Gong skill in slamming, Leonardo’s master swordsman slashing. Ninjutsu skills, arms swinging, feet kicking Following every skilled move they’re making. Heartbeat of siblings bonding, like breathing. Big brother is always encouraging, Never giving up on our life squabbling, protective, understanding, still willing to play, do fun things, smiling, ensuring. 5/25/2016 5/25/2016
Poetry Contest ; Personal Memories Monorhyme II - Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Date: 9/27/2016 1:53:00 AM
Wow. Breathtaking. w
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Date: 7/14/2016 8:56:00 AM
Brilliant work plus perfect meter!
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Date: 6/18/2016 12:31:00 PM
Congrats. Nice monorhyme and very creative. :)
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Date: 6/18/2016 10:03:00 AM
fantastic and well deserved win. BIG congrats, Eve.
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Date: 6/18/2016 4:21:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your wonderful first place win:) Well done, Eve:)
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Date: 6/16/2016 8:12:00 PM
Congratulations Eve, wonderful win...
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Date: 6/16/2016 5:31:00 PM
I knew it would be a winner:-) many congrats Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/16/2016 4:21:00 PM
So much action, Eve! Love the line: heartbeat of siblings bonding, like breathing. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/16/2016 3:57:00 PM
I LOVE THIS Eve! I am so happy to see it in first place where it belongs! The picture is precious! Congratulations! #7 ; )
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Date: 6/16/2016 10:22:00 AM
Sorry i missed this wonderful poem to read. It's really an enjoyable poem. A great congrats on your superb win and a beautiful 7 my lovely smiling friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/16/2016 7:57:00 AM
Eve, I loved this of course! Congrats on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest! :)-luloo
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/16/2016 10:38:00 AM
you're very welcome Eve :)-luloo
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/16/2016 8:36:00 AM
Wow!! I'm honored, Laura, thank you :-) Hugs
Date: 6/16/2016 7:46:00 AM
Hi, Eve, I am back again to give you my heartfelt congratulations on your First Place Trophy win in Laura's Premiere contest! Well done! 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/29/2016 3:03:00 PM
remarkable work; i'm joining in the fun, eve..huggs
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Date: 5/29/2016 10:12:00 AM
Great use of the form. A happy picture you have painted with your words Eve.
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Date: 5/29/2016 12:22:00 AM
Your poem is as amazing as the photo! Loved this Eve!
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/29/2016 9:37:00 AM
Thank you, Arthur :-)
Date: 5/28/2016 9:25:00 PM
What loving siblings. I like their attitude. Thank you for reading and commenting on my win. Love, Joyce
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/29/2016 9:38:00 AM
Thank you, Joyce,your poem was beautiful :-)
Date: 5/28/2016 1:06:00 PM
Such a lovely piece Eve, smashing rhyme and flow, a real enjoyable piece!
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/29/2016 9:41:00 AM
Thank you, Gordon, for your complement :-)
Date: 5/27/2016 8:32:00 PM
Eve, this is so awesome how you named them all. Do you actually know their names or did you make them up? GREAT job.
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/29/2016 9:45:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea, I knew their names. I was going to write it with no names , but it was meaningful :-)
Date: 5/26/2016 12:26:00 PM
Looks like you had fun writing this poem in monorhyme form, Eve, and the children are having a great time, too! gl for the contest. Hugs // paul
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/29/2016 9:48:00 AM
Thank you, Paul, brought back memories of my youngest roll playing having fun :-)
Date: 5/26/2016 8:57:00 AM
It's so neat when siblings all get along ... and enjoy each other. It sure looks like that in the pic, and I love how you described it in your poem. Very nice, Eve.
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/26/2016 9:40:00 AM
Thank you, Becca, this was a little difficult to write having to keep it in a 10 syllables and rhymes :-)
Date: 5/26/2016 8:47:00 AM
Excellent. Well described with great rhyming. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it
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Date: 5/26/2016 5:10:00 AM
What a joy to read! What happiness to see it live! Wonderful dear, Eve!
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Date: 5/26/2016 4:40:00 AM
The whole picture beautifully described:) Great write Eve:)
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/29/2016 9:37:00 AM
Thank you, Jo :-)
Date: 5/26/2016 1:17:00 AM
what a charming interpretation of the photo - good luck in the contest Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/29/2016 9:36:00 AM
Thank you, Jan, :-)
Date: 5/25/2016 8:23:00 PM
Lots of action and description here, Eve, with great rhyming! It reads like the 'whirlwind' the kids display in the photo! Laura will love it! Hugs, Sandra
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/29/2016 9:35:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra :-)

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