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Wooden bones

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Wooden bones

 His strings are attached
But he is as still as a stone
Unable to move his wooden bones
The magic wand has no effect
He has eyes  that seem detached 
No pulse that anyone detects
The puppet master  sits in despair
 It is just as he had feared
Alas! ...the puppet has become the puppeteer!

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  1. Date: 8/6/2013 7:01:00 AM
    I loved this one from the very start Joseph, I hope you have energized him, cause your the Master who holds the key dear heart, have a great day, and don't let anything get you down, Live Love Laugh, and enjoy the moment, for it is the most precious thing we own, love to you xxx

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 8/6/2013 12:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for those kind sentiments Rose.....Much love to you also... hugs
  1. Date: 8/5/2013 1:13:00 PM
    - Moving ... well written Joseph!! - All the best to you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 1:24:00 PM
    Simple theme of a puppeteer on the surface, but very deep underlying meaning here Joseph-- Great write.

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 12:08:00 PM
    your piece moves me in just a few lines.. so solid and heartwarming; this is pinnochio in the limelight, joseph... well done!..:)

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 8/4/2013 12:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Nette....I appreciate your comments
  1. Date: 8/4/2013 8:32:00 AM
    Joseph you have created a breathtaking image in eight lines, I love puppets, but I hate to see a tearful one, hope he will smile real soon, enjoyed your write love xxx

    May Avatar Joseph May
    Date: 8/4/2013 9:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Rose....yes he will smile soon as the strings slowly energize him....hugs