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Wondering

Deep gray cluds like doorsteps supported Between two large gray clouds Or like fanstrokes by the artist Who paints blank canvas proud Such a blue sky behind suspended Clouds like cotton balls hang From imaginary silk string Or mother's epic meringue Now there is a tiny T-Rex Running up those dark steps I still wonder as a child how How those clouds hanging kept?

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Harry Horsman

Date: 9/2/2012 4:23:00 AM

the imagery here is wonderful, enjoyed this so much.. thanks

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/1/2012 5:00:00 PM

The clouds were just miraculously hanging along! As they do even today, an interesting concept clouds are! The are truly a fascination to behold, I do love them! I can tell by your poem that you too enjoy looking at these entities as well, these behemoths of the sky! I love this write, it brought back memories of days when I used to stare up at the sky when I was younger...and just yesterday! Thanks for sharing this awesome write my friend! Great Work!!

Joy Wellington

Date: 9/1/2012 4:50:00 PM

It's the magnificent wonder of God, Sara. I would like you to read my poem "How Great Thou Art". It praises the wonder and greatness of God...I wrote this while in an airplane. I love your write...God bless and one love. Joy Wells

Joy Wellington
Date: 9/1/2012 5:25:00 PM

Thanks for reading Sara and for your lovely comments.