Get Your Premium Membership

Women's Circle

Listen to poem:
Taking the risk, Baring the soul, Seeking the wisdom That shall make us whole. Raising the arms, Spreading the wings, Hearing the music That deep in us sings. Stepping the dance, Chanting the song, Feeling the sisterhood Tender and strong. Sharing the love, Speaking the name, Calling the blessing And lighting the flame. Written 7/28/2016 Take the Dagger from my Heart, Please- Poetry Contest sponsored by Broken Wing N/A in Premiere Contest Number 5, Judged 8/27/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/17/2018 3:16:00 PM
Wow what a gorgeous tune a capella catapulting your poem to the level of a prayer or chant. Lovely, Agnes.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/5/2017 5:32:00 AM
So pure
Login to Reply
Krampe Avatar
Agnes Krampe
Date: 12/5/2017 7:05:00 AM
Thank you, Noorulain.
Date: 9/8/2017 1:30:00 PM
Hi there Agnes, I love this poem. I was wondering if you would allow me to share it on my blog for inspirations of words to share for Blessingways or Mother Blessing Ceremonies? My blog is located here: http://sacredpathbirth.com/blog/. Thank you! Avira
Login to Reply
Krampe Avatar
Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/9/2017 3:24:00 PM
Avira, I would be honored. Please feel free to use the poem. I am sending you soup mail
Date: 8/6/2016 9:42:00 PM
Oh I just had to see this one . Its title really drew me in and it does exactly what I thought it would!! Great poem.
Login to Reply
Krampe Avatar
Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/7/2016 6:33:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I wrote this as a song for a retreat of our women's circle. Here is an audio: https://soundcloud.com/rain-woman2/taking-the-risk

Book: Reflection on the Important Things