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Without you there's no me

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Without you there's no me

Your essence was conceived
from my rib, a clavicle that 
would entwine us forever.

As Adam to Eve, from the
beginning & to the ending of
our time.

You are the "W" to my world,
where your entity is my true
existence.

Like freash air to my nose
& my body to clothes,
you complete me.

You are the fruit to my tree,
without you it's so difficult
to breath.

So, please...empathize wiith me,
because Without you there's no me.

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  1. Date: 10/9/2008 10:19:00 AM
    You successfully place such strong emotion in this write making yourself clear with a good use of imagery. Very well written. Michael