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Without You

Time they say will ease the pain your heart will heal as you live again I don't believe I can honestly say I can be who I was before that horrible day Life was cruel on that September day when death was certain as it took you away A mothers love there is nothing as strong I still can't understand what went so wrong

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Skat A

Date: 4/13/2014 8:15:00 PM

I soft, and touching poem, Chris. everything said here, is heartfelt. SKAT

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 1/31/2014 1:41:00 PM

This is sad, but very well written. It is hard to go on living when you lose someone you love, but life goes on. Congratulations on your poem being featureg. Thanks for the visit to my page... Lucilla

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/28/2014 9:57:00 PM

Congratulations on having this write featured by the site this week. Your first submission is a good one.

Jerry Bolton

Date: 1/27/2014 2:03:00 PM

No, I think you are correct, you never will be before the day death took your child away.

Alexis Bennett

Date: 1/17/2014 7:16:00 AM

Aw. The pain youfelt was real, i can tell by your words. You know how to get emotion to your readers.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 1/15/2014 11:05:00 AM

Welcome to p soup Chris! I share your work in my soul! However, there is a reunion time where mother's love will dance! My best, chuck

Aiyah Torres

Date: 1/14/2014 5:02:00 PM

sad..love and loss..a painful game of life we must be played..nice piece of memories here..kudos!!! ..Aiyah ^__^