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without you

The day When I met  you ..
,was truly  the day when my life begun ..
When I got words for my silence
colors to my life …
Shades of my presence..and
meaning of my existence..!!!! 
What if I deny that you’re no more loved by me 
forgotten by me ..
 But my heart ..
Ah my rebellious heart !!!
Which denies the rule .. Acts so cruel ..
oh my heart !! I beseech you 
 let me forget 
the moments which I spent with  him ..
laughed together 
cried together  ..
living with his  haunted memories is hard..  
And ..
It‘s hard to live without you !!


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  1. Date: 1/8/2013 2:19:00 PM
    MONA :-) your poem has been a wonderful write to find on the soups front page... '"Congratulations"" with your awesome featured poem of the week... always~ LINDA

    Jalees Avatar mona Jalees
    Date: 1/9/2013 5:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm so pleased to see this.thanx for appreciating and encouraging me :):)
  1. Date: 1/7/2013 5:42:00 AM
    Thanx alot for selecting my poetry this week with other poems on main page :)

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 3:09:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry soup, I enjoyed your heartfelt poem. Very intresting use of words, I like how you created the mood of this piece. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem

    Jalees Avatar mona Jalees
    Date: 12/30/2012 3:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanx Richard !!! I just write what I feel :)
  1. Date: 12/25/2012 6:53:00 AM
    When love birds sing on sorrows notes, the nightingales chips its wonderous refute, it never dies, it never dies, just give it another try. Better to be loved than never at all, nice read.

    Jalees Avatar mona Jalees
    Date: 12/25/2012 11:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    well said !! thanx for appreciating me in this manner .
  1. Date: 12/20/2012 11:11:00 AM
    A touching, but very well written poem Mona - I like it! - Wishing you welcome to P- Soup, hope you will get much pleasure to share your thoughts and poems here with us. - Read and give comments and you will get back. - Always nice to get comments on what we write. - Hope Christmas will be a pleasant and peaceful time for you and your family. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jalees Avatar mona Jalees
    Date: 12/22/2012 4:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thankyou very much for your words .I 'm so pleased :)
  1. Date: 12/20/2012 10:42:00 AM
    A very warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning Mona. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

    Jalees Avatar mona Jalees
    Date: 12/22/2012 4:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I wud luv to learn from other poets and that will guide in writing my own :) thanx for your words !!
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 12:43:00 PM
    yet we must move on. great poem - JH

    Jalees Avatar mona Jalees
    Date: 12/22/2012 4:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    moving on is sometimes difficult ..anyway thanx alot :)