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Without You

The day When I met you .. ,was truly the day when my life begun .. When I got words for my silence colors to my life … Shades of my presence..and meaning of my existence..!!!! What if I deny that you’re no more loved by me forgotten by me .. But my heart .. Ah my rebellious heart !!! Which denies the rule .. Acts so cruel .. oh my heart !! I beseech you let me forget the moments which I spent with him .. laughed together cried together .. living with his haunted memories is hard.. And .. It‘s hard to live without you !!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/8/2013 2:19:00 PM

MONA :-) your poem has been a wonderful write to find on the soups front page... '"Congratulations"" with your awesome featured poem of the week... always~ LINDA

Mona Jalees
Date: 1/9/2013 5:36:00 AM

I'm so pleased to see this.thanx for appreciating and encouraging me :):)

Mona Jalees

Date: 1/7/2013 5:42:00 AM

Thanx alot for selecting my poetry this week with other poems on main page :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/29/2012 3:09:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry soup, I enjoyed your heartfelt poem. Very intresting use of words, I like how you created the mood of this piece. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem

Mona Jalees
Date: 12/30/2012 3:11:00 AM

Thanx Richard !!! I just write what I feel :)

Reggae Magnet

Date: 12/25/2012 6:53:00 AM

When love birds sing on sorrows notes, the nightingales chips its wonderous refute, it never dies, it never dies, just give it another try. Better to be loved than never at all, nice read.

Mona Jalees
Date: 12/25/2012 11:56:00 PM

well said !! thanx for appreciating me in this manner .

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/20/2012 11:11:00 AM

A touching, but very well written poem Mona - I like it! - Wishing you welcome to P- Soup, hope you will get much pleasure to share your thoughts and poems here with us. - Read and give comments and you will get back. - Always nice to get comments on what we write. - Hope Christmas will be a pleasant and peaceful time for you and your family. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mona Jalees
Date: 12/22/2012 4:42:00 AM

Thankyou very much for your words .I 'm so pleased :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/20/2012 10:42:00 AM

A very warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning Mona. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Mona Jalees
Date: 12/22/2012 4:43:00 AM

I wud luv to learn from other poets and that will guide in writing my own :) thanx for your words !!

Honestly J.T.

Date: 12/18/2012 12:43:00 PM

yet we must move on. great poem - JH

Mona Jalees
Date: 12/22/2012 4:44:00 AM

moving on is sometimes difficult ..anyway thanx alot :)