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The Marketplace Collection

senryu / senryu series the marketplace well-dressed mannequin speaks to shoppers ~~~~~~~~ without knowing the well-dressed manneqin beckons shoppers ~~~~~~~~ eye-speak the well-dressed mannequin beckons shoppers fluid salesman fools only himself by sleight-of-mouth ~~~~~~~~~

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/5/2012 5:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Single Senryu contest Reason. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/2/2012 1:22:00 PM

REASON, Congratulations with your awesome win in Susan's "Single Senryu" contest. ~ :-) xox~ PD

Kash Poet

Date: 10/2/2012 6:48:00 AM

Very good example of a senryu!!Congratulations on your win in the contest Reason.

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/1/2012 9:21:00 PM

Well done and so true. Congratulations on this original work. Lee

Joann Grisetti

Date: 10/1/2012 6:06:00 PM

Congratulations on a creative win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2012 2:25:00 PM

Cute one! The clothes themselves do all the talking. Congrats on your win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/1/2012 1:22:00 PM

Congratulations Reason xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/20/2012 5:35:00 AM

This one reminds me of a song of years ago called "Glendora"..A man falls in love with a mannequin in the window of a department store..Like the work if for a contest, good luck..Winner in my book..Thanks for stopping by..We live rural also and can just let Princess outside but when we went on holiday we had to walk her in certain places only..Sara