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Without Limits

Most of my life I’ve fit into a small four-sided box. I had no thought I might escape this prison with no locks. Obedient daughter of my parents and the ever-loving wife striving to be the perfect mother, I put limits on my life. I can’t pretend that I am sorry I prized their welfare over mine, but with ending of my duties life can be of my design. It is far too late I realize for the plans I laid aside when I promised to be dutiful as a young and happy bride. After thirty years of employment, for a while it was a shock. that I need not set the buzzer. I don’t revolve around the clock. I have missed the chance, I’m certain, to have accumulated wealth, but there are roles unlimited for elders in good health. I have found a latent talent that has been with me since birth. I’ve had the chance to let it grow and to travel o’er the Earth. With this forum so unlimited I can send my words afar with unfettered possibilities they could catch upon a star. With my little house around me to protect me from the storm, I have limitless time to venture. I dare to tackle a new form. By: Joyce Johnson For Paula's contest "Limitless"

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Date: 5/10/2011 7:20:00 AM
Dear Joyce, What a great write! Full of reflection and transparency...many can relate to the clock runnin out on us...I too placed so many limits on myself and full of regret...each day still has its potential though. Again, a very nice poem and one worth keeping for me treasure trove! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/4/2011 9:32:00 AM
Perhaps one of the best rewards of retirement is leaving the alarm unset and filling your days with activities you enjoy, Joyce. I'm sure your poetic talent has always been with you, but you have more time to enjoy it now. Great take on "limitless" opportunities. Wishing you success in Paula's contest. Hope your brother is doing better. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/3/2011 7:37:00 PM
I enjoy couplets and the attitude and faith within this "new form", Joyce. Thanks and good luck in the contest
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Date: 5/3/2011 6:58:00 PM
Beautiful positive expressions and who would not wish such a bliss as yours, Joyce
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Date: 5/3/2011 12:00:00 PM
The poetry here at the Soup today is so diverse. It was a pleasure to read yours Joyce. Have a wonderful day and may you find inspiration to continue writing always. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2011 11:57:00 AM
oh joyce, the possibilities are endless! what a dreamy, solid write that validates the thought that your words are boundless ... best winning wishes to you. :) huggs,nette
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Date: 5/3/2011 11:43:00 AM
very nice indeed.. A nice insight to who you are good luck in the contest. I have yet to write anything but i will im sure. Check out my newest write Search.. cory I'm almost done my flower garden YAY
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