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Within His Eyes

I neither saw nor felt love, but an arresting darkness and hate. Captured by the moment, I needed an escape. But I remained, not knowing which path to take. The thought that I should not have looked never occurred to me. More than 40 years ago, I encountered the eyes of deceit. His eyes seemed to cast me into a mild freeze, rendering defeat. Some eyes defy any sense of comfort and promote fear. Such eyes intimidate and seem to wrap themselves around you. Like the eyes of a demon, forcing one to stand down and question. I felt a cloud of darkness within his eyes, and slowly backed away. I had little experience with such encounters, as I studied for my degree. One older and stronger than me, took command, calming that angry human sea. 10142016 PS Contest, 2nd entry, I Should Not Have Looked, Mystic Rose;1Pl. Ist Contest 10142016 Brief Memories, F J Thomas

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Date: 6/19/2017 11:00:00 PM
Dark story, Curtis, but well presented, congratulations:)
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 6/19/2017 11:42:00 PM
Thank you for your comment, Jo.
Date: 6/15/2017 12:57:00 PM
Curtis, congratulations on your awesome win! Love the story you have created ~*
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 6/15/2017 1:11:00 PM
Thank you, Eve.

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