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With the One You Love

~ Walking slowly hand in hand Along a wooded patch of land Taking in the beauty that we see Sitting on a lakeside shore In these moments we adore All alone together you and me Kissing under skies of blue Soft upon the early dew Here within my arms where you belong Hearing bluebirds in the trees Singing sweet their harmonies Melodic is their perfect springtime song Watching as the squirrels run Beneath a wondrous morning sun Smiling is the thing we seem to do A cool breeze floats within your hair The scent of flowers everywhere Still my every heartbeat is for you Clouds meander, passing slow Different shapes they come to show As we gaze and point high up above Spending days amidst this view Always is a dream come true When they’re spent with you, the one I love ~

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Date: 10/31/2016 6:46:00 PM
Very beautiful and romantic poem Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/31/2016 7:13:00 PM
Thank you so very much Nayda
Date: 10/17/2016 1:28:00 PM
Ahh. Sooo Romantic...
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Chris Green
Date: 10/17/2016 1:34:00 PM
Thanks so much Charmaine. :)
Date: 10/17/2016 10:16:00 AM
I liked the rhyme scheme as well in this most romantic piece. You do love poems so well.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/17/2016 10:18:00 AM
Not as well as you my poetic friend, but I appreciate your kinds words.
Date: 10/17/2016 8:47:00 AM
Great Rhyme scheme, it reminds me of Terza Rima I use it sometimes for romantic writes, it really fits well!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/17/2016 9:27:00 AM
Well then I learned something today. Terza Rima is a new term to me. I'm not to up on the official names of poetic genre. Thanks for that John and thank for your kind words.
Date: 10/17/2016 7:03:00 AM
Now that's romantic Chris /|\ lovely!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/17/2016 8:23:00 AM
Thanks so very much Rick. I am glad you liked this one.

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