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© G. V., 08-05-2013, All Rights Reserved
(Iambic tetrameter)

contest: Sand
sponsor: nette oncloud
Placement: 3rd

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with scents of sandalwood

The shadows shape upon the fields
agrestic pictures within glance
assuage the darkness and advance
annealed the sky that shines and shields.

Two bellwether outshining stars
bedaub the darkness that derides
the grooms of brines and Siren brides,
- deep rooted are soul's iron bars.

The Autumn rain arrived today
amidst bedizened gowns and deems
blithe - random forms on clouds regimes
that gallivant the dawn's delay.

Unmoved the stars - surreal hood
(beholden night, the smiles evades)
the solitude and dreams she raids
with resin scents of sandalwood.

The woods (like stars) and souls are still
billet the travelers and wraiths
vibrato of the man who breathes
her olive eyes that deep instill.

The sandalwood and olive eyes
transform the night to sovereign frame
that streams the songs above to claim
the sky's two stars' eternal prize.

© G. V., 09-13-2013
(Iambic tetrameter)

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  1. Date: 9/22/2013 8:13:00 PM
    Hello G, a beautiful winning poem... xox..Linda

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 12:03:00 PM
    Really enjoyed this...many congratulations

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 4:33:00 PM
    Dear Giorgio, You can easily perfume the stars With your poetry, it's that good congrats on your win, xxx

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 12:45:00 PM
    you just enchant me with your content, wordplay and rhythmn, G... sweet congratas; do check my blog.. i wrote about your piece..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 10:18:00 AM
    Wonderful poem Giorgio ...Seren

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:17:00 AM
    wow...what a beautifully crafted your unique images....congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:13:00 AM
    The sandalwood and olive eyes...... What a lovely line that is......".transform the night to sovereign frame" ........ wow, just beautiful !! Congrats to you !!

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 8:45:00 AM
    Very creative and excellent poem as always! My hearty congratulations on your super win my dear friend Giorgio. Thank you so much for sharing as well. I truly enjoyed. Have a great day! love lots and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 8:28:00 AM
    a real wow of a poem I was carried off by your pen to this wondrous place congrats on win Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 7:50:00 AM
    This piece demonstrates your limitless talent. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 6:23:00 AM
    Beautiful thoughts Giorgio, an emotional journey. Congrats

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 4:28:00 AM
    I knew this was a winning poem. are gifted!!! Congrats on your placement!!!

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 11:17:00 PM
    The woods ( like stars)and souls are still/billet the travellers and wraiths/vibrato of the man who bresthes/her olive eyes that deep instill-How romantic can it get?Not more then this dazzling verses-Going to mine favs

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 8:00:00 PM
    I can see it, thanks to you're honorous poemxxx

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 7:38:00 PM
    An awesome write....good luck in the contest!!

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 4:01:00 PM
    I love the descriptiveness of this shadowy poem. Very intriguing and unique!