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With Out You Revised

Just as The flowers wither without the sunshine and rain and without the winter cold the snowman melts away Just as Without more wood the fire will surely die and without a cocoon the caterpillar will not become a butterfly Just as The trees loose their leaves when summer turns to fall And ears that turn deaf cannot hear the birds morning song Just as The electric lamp shines no light when from its power source it has been unplugged And without your dear friendship without your precious love Alas, oh my darling, I am like all of the above

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/6/2012 5:25:00 PM
I love this one! just beautiful. You are an excellent addition to the soup. Looking forward to reading more.
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Joanmarie Peranteau
Date: 12/6/2012 6:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, you are too kind...Have you read my brother James Peranteau's writes?
Date: 12/6/2012 3:25:00 AM
This is amazingly written JoanMarie! I love the imagery you've used to describe the loss experienced when you're without someone you care about - well developed. Very nice!
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Joanmarie Peranteau
Date: 12/6/2012 9:03:00 AM
Bonjour Vicky, Thank you so much for your comment and appreciation for this poem.
Date: 12/5/2012 12:53:00 PM
A very good poem Joan Marie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Joanmarie Peranteau
Date: 12/5/2012 5:05:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise, I appreciate your comment.

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