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With Her Tempting Pose

Her tempting pout bounces from night's artwork like a slow fire that churns a raw desire in need to be quenched ... and it is so mysteriously enchanting: to be entrapped by that feminine aura that simply blazes on a spotlight of lure-- red-tossed hair flitting along tangy whiffs of potion absolute, unrestrained: how her blazed glimpses pulse within contours of her appeal that minstrel stars collapse... The shimmer of her alchemy draws gasping breaths like evening gaslights sensible only to the wisps of a goddess' heat, leaving mortals in awe—-and her fluid pose seems to jut out from a glass frame to rush forth with all her womanly senses gushing, meant to return on the edge of wild abandon, enticing brushstrokes with her faceted charm never ever the same each time. -------------- Roy Jerden's East Jesus' Contest 12/24/2014 ~ inspiration from picture no.7 ( last photo)

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Date: 1/3/2015 7:51:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/3/2015 7:49:00 AM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. An excellent thought is penned well. Loved always,bl
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Date: 1/3/2015 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win nette
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Date: 1/3/2015 5:53:00 AM
Congrats on the fine win and nice take on the theme,
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Date: 1/3/2015 12:08:00 AM
oh gee, I forget what the last photo was. you should put it with the poem, Nette. anyway, you captured its essence with great flair! congrats on your worthy win.
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Date: 1/2/2015 11:51:00 PM
Nette, Interesting topic, poem and win. CONGRATULATIONS!!! Goodnight ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/2/2015 7:09:00 PM
congratulations Nette of this fine win, well done
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Date: 1/2/2015 1:53:00 PM
Nette, what wonderful interpretation and imagery from that photo! Congratulations on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/2/2015 12:23:00 PM
Great one nette.Congratulations on win. Hugs!> RAJAT
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:50:00 AM
Another hot cake like" Her raw cannal" ; I must say I really enjoy it nette,congrats on the win...huggs
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:17:00 AM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Nette:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:03:00 AM
Congratulations nette on your win with this stunning write. I think you chose the most difficult of images, Marilyn Monroe as a strawberry blond and then did an amazing job of pulling this excellent write from it.
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Date: 1/2/2015 9:50:00 AM
Been awesome Nette! Great paint my friend! Wishing u a very happy n prosperous new year 2015!
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Date: 12/27/2014 2:41:00 PM
Yes, I've seen that photo (reminded me of Marlene Monroe) and you did wonders eliciting these seductive lines just from a face. To be honest, I think this poem is a better painting than the original picture! Well done!! // paul
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:50:00 AM
....back with congratulations Nette...very merited!
Date: 12/27/2014 2:03:00 PM
What has poured forth from your pen here, is a magical, mystical portrait. Hope you have a fantastic new year.
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Date: 12/25/2014 10:39:00 AM
Nette, beautiful painting you have painted with your pen. Merry Christmas & a very Happy New Year and may all your wishes and dreams come true
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Date: 12/25/2014 8:50:00 AM
I am not only impressed.I was totally involved by the mystique of your seamless, creative poem! I looked at the visual and you really turned the scene around. Have a fine holiday, Nette
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Date: 12/25/2014 5:50:00 AM
amazing write Nette, beautifully tempting and seductive.
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Date: 12/25/2014 5:32:00 AM
"The shimmer of her alchemy draws gasping breaths like evening gaslights" ...Superb!! You have a beautiful poetic turn of phrase, Nette. All the very best for Christmas and the New Year. Cheers!!! :-) john.
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Date: 12/24/2014 5:13:00 PM
You create a montage of images with sensuality and elegance. That's a classy woman! Very visual and brilliant poem, so alive! Merry Christmas, Nette
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Date: 12/24/2014 3:53:00 PM
such brilliant imagery Nette - good luck with the contest:-) hugs Jan x
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Date: 12/24/2014 3:34:00 PM
Wonderful! You always leave me inspired...happy holidays to you and your family, Nette. May the blessings of love and peace be yours...hugs, Rhonda
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