Witch

I found out a witch put a spell on me Ive never been more alive senses all on alert emotion's all over the place I will treasure this love godess i see her at darkness of night full moon no star's no regret no remorse we kiss we drink each other's blood light candle's we make love we create a love godess

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Bradley Cox

Date: 8/14/2012 5:24:00 AM

Thank You for reading, and the feed back, i will check spelling better, I also look forward to reading your poetry as well, and thank you for the greeting

Glenn Sentes

Date: 8/14/2012 4:00:00 AM

this is the best of your works...just a little correction on spellings and everything is perfect! I would love to read more of your poetry, Brad=) Welcome to PS bro! ;)

Terry O'Leary

Date: 8/13/2012 3:11:00 AM

A bewitching poem! Terry

Bradley Cox
Date: 8/13/2012 7:08:00 AM

terry , thank you once again i will be trying to find your's so i can enjoy

Bradley Cox

Date: 8/13/2012 12:33:00 AM

Robert, thank you for the welcome and also for reading my peom and i will watch for correction's better, i hope you did well writing on witch craft,

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/12/2012 5:24:00 PM

Welcome to the site. I had to check this one out because I recently submitted a series of four poems based on a witch. I am not an adherent to witchcraft or any other form of neopaganism. You have the makings of a good write here. A few corrections can be made where "star's" and "candle's" do not require apostophes. Also, your word "godess" is correctly spelled "goddess".