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Wistful Attraction

That momentous longing that purposed many lowly nights dissipated Just as I found myself in your presence once again You tease me, flirt with me, confuse the hell out of me, You touch me in strange ways as I strenuously gaze Once you massaged my hands playfully, But I saw through your frivolous actions a lust unacquainted with jest I slowly began to realize, that when I confessed my attraction to you through that letter, That I was serving you my heart on a rusty platter Hoping for an arrow to shoot us down to seriousness But we are close friends, not on the brink of romance We are silly and wacked out of all reason Too much alike, too little acquainted in what I dream of You are full of games and I am full of fire Sometimes we are just on the brink of drifting our separate ways You treat me like I am in high demand, That you only have the time right now to be with me, And must get all of me that you can To hold me close and take what you need before the next comes to engorge I am your friend, your close friend, This tension makes me furious and sore Why can’t we just be us without the demand for more?
---Shoutout to my best friend Becca Larkin for helping me with a title. I always struggle with that!!!! RAWR---

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/12/2016 8:55:00 AM
Classic, intelligent, sublime and graceful. As usual, yet another excellent piece from you dear poet. Happy new year once again
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/13/2016 2:55:00 AM
Thank you Funom! That is very sweet of you! Your words mean a lot... ~Laura
Date: 1/5/2016 6:59:00 PM
excellent write Laura...
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/6/2016 11:13:00 PM
Hello White Sage! Thanks for the praise! Will be checking out your work soon. ~Laura
Date: 1/3/2016 3:39:00 PM
Relationships are so complex. I believe it is actually useful and normal to think of all the possibilities and to change opinions and fantasies to try them out mentally. I've never seen something like this expressed in poetry. You are a fantastic psychologist poet. I have a friend who is close and then pulls away. A good person who I never completely understand. Also a comedian full of funny comments on human nature. A lot of fun to be with.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/6/2016 11:13:00 PM
You always say something interesting in relation to my poetry, dear. Thank you for visiting so much and leaving your thoughts and encouragement. ~Laura
Date: 1/2/2016 6:57:00 PM
Selfish passion will never satisfy the sacred demands of love, of genuine friendship...this beautifully honest poem evokes this truth in my mind of fire and sincerity Laura. The love I share, live with every day, every moment, is sometimes selfish, sometimes mysterious, sometimes severe, yet it is always honest, true, and passionate for the only one I love, as a woman and as my closest friend. "Too much alike, to little acquainted with what I dream of..." your open heart is amazing Laura...J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/3/2016 1:57:00 AM
I love the honesty that you live by Justin, and I love you...I fall in love so easily, and not just in the romantic sense..I have to breathe in and out, open my eyes, and wake up sometimes(begrudgingly), because the others are not usually in the clouds with me. This particular friendship I have is like a tide...we rise and then we fall, almost losing each other but then someone, something pulls us back. I respect our bond too much to risk something more, and especially when I am there in the moment... I like being open with you Justin. There is nothing I feel but pure admiration and fascination for you. ~Laura
Date: 1/2/2016 11:15:00 AM
excellent and powerful read very enjoyable
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/2/2016 5:35:00 PM
Thanks Anthony! Glad you enjoyed reading. ~Laura :)
Date: 1/2/2016 5:17:00 AM
Powerful write, sweetie. Those last 3 lines really bring your message home.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/2/2016 5:28:00 PM
Thank you, beautiful Eileen. Complications with friendships sure does make me sore. I am really sensitive and tend to pick up on things which are no big deal for some, but that mean everything to me. I have felt many things for this friend for a long time it seems, yet I know well it will be mind games and silliness, the quirks of friendship sometimes are not accustomed or ready for romance, and I respect the natural order of our hearts and minds. ~Laura
Date: 1/2/2016 4:17:00 AM
Great write Laura, Fantastic imagery, Lovely write! Love, The Blue Poet! :)
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/2/2016 5:20:00 PM
Thank you for visiting and the sweet comment! :) I will check out your page soon. ~ Laura
Date: 1/2/2016 3:23:00 AM
Nice write Laura....your complexity echoes in this piece....Peter
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/2/2016 5:18:00 PM
I love your comment Peter..thank you for your input and understanding..~Laura

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