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Wishing To Ride

The train hurdles into the black Bound for who knows where and back White billowing from its smoke stack Mesmerized by it repetitive clickity clack Wondering,and wishfully looking down the track...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/10/2014 2:41:00 PM
Way to go with this great winning work..Clickity-clack...Sara
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Date: 4/10/2014 7:39:00 AM
Nice flow of words and expressions. Congrats on a fine win, barbara
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Date: 4/9/2014 8:58:00 PM
BARBARA, , it's an honor to be the first to comment this poem. A poem, i enjoyed while in my contest... THANK YOU VERY MUCH, CONGRATULATIONS.... :) This was a very tough one to judge... GEEES, enjoy my latest blog if you like.... always & forever... Linda
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