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Wishing To Hold Her Hand

How I greet thee star with my wish tonight! Will you grant me a twinkle from your sky, Do I dare dream upon your beauty bright? Burning like candles with eternal flames, Shine down, shine down and fill me with your light, Fulfill the desire to hold her hand. I want to reach out and hold her sweet hand, How I wish upon you shining tonight. I shall watch you glow until morning light! Till dawn shall awake with my blue heart sky, For my dreams burn hotter than the suns flames She lives in my soul, eternally bright. There is no other that can burn so bright I long for her touch, the softness of her hand Can you hear my plea, my words are like flames. Will you wink your approval down tonight, How long shall I stare into your dark sky? I shall stare until the breaking dawn’s light. Grant me this wish and be my guiding light Lead me to the touch that makes my life bright A love that’s as deep as your endless sky. Let me melt into the touch of her hand, This shall be the only wish I wish tonight, Cast all other dreams upon unending flames. I will light the match and fan my dreams flames, Promise me her touch before the day light, The smile on her face I can feel tonight. Dear star, oh dear star, that shines down so bright, Do you feel the pain as I long for her hand? Feel the depth of my love in your moonlit sky. How many wishes shall I place in the sky Will you fall from the heavens in a ball of flames Because of my request to hold her hand? Please hear my words for I shall have no light, Can you catch a falling star, no longer shining bright? My wishes are yours to answer tonight. I dream of her hand and pray to the sky Searching tonight for the lustrous flames My wish before sun light, grant me star bright!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/29/2010 5:41:00 PM
Hi Travis. This is so outstanding I think it should be a shoo in . Like Julian I look forward to reading more of your work. thank you for stopping by.....Margaret
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Date: 4/28/2010 7:02:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem
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Date: 4/28/2010 6:32:00 PM
This was amazing, I'm reading the rest of your poems for sure. Awesome
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Date: 4/28/2010 6:14:00 PM
I enjoyed this passionate poem
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