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Wish Upon a Star

My heart beats out loud, So far he can't hear All i want is one wish upon a star, To be there, To be near. To look in his eyes, And know that he's mine, Because i promise you We've got nothing but time. But life's not like that So i'll shed a tear, Watch as he leaves me, My love, My dear. Now look to the star's The die has been cast He's not my future, Only my past.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/21/2013 12:08:00 AM
Nice little write to convey your feelings about this man. Just one thing: remove the apostrophe from "star's" in your fifteenth line. Apostrophes are not needed to convert nouns from singular to plural.
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