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Winters Eve

The day pales, kept alive only by the radiance of the snow Fading rays cascade across the pristine fields Casting shades of pink and blue in final tribute to the day Barren trees, ice coated, catch and reflect the pastel hues Their shadows reaching out in search of evening Bidding farewell, the sun rests its head upon The bed of clouds, just beyond the horizon Sinking slowly behind the distant hills Drifting into night, wrapped in darkness Dreaming of a bright tomorrow
11/18/2011

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Date: 12/7/2011 5:51:00 PM
just lovely as some days are! Thanks for stopping by Light & Love
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/7/2011 10:18:00 PM
And thank you Debbie
Date: 11/22/2011 12:27:00 PM
Delighted to see this awesome poem taking first place in Brian's contest, Bob. Congratulations! Love and blessings for a Happy Thanksgiving, Carolyn
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/22/2011 1:16:00 PM
And to you and yours Carolyn
Date: 11/22/2011 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Your Choice Verse" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/22/2011 1:17:00 PM
Thank you Carol
Date: 11/21/2011 4:42:00 PM
You set the most beautiful picture in my mind's eye. Lovely poem, Bob! and it finishes with a sense of hope and promise! :)
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/21/2011 5:11:00 PM
Thank you Carrie. Kind of you to say.
Date: 11/21/2011 4:08:00 PM
Awesome write,Bob.Congrats on your well deserved win....
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/21/2011 5:11:00 PM
Thank you Olusegun
Date: 11/21/2011 4:33:00 AM
Congrats on your win Bob x
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/21/2011 8:19:00 AM
Thank you Mandy
Date: 11/21/2011 4:28:00 AM
Many congrats on your first place win in the contest. Truly deserved
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/21/2011 8:20:00 AM
Appreciated Joseph
Date: 11/20/2011 6:50:00 PM
Congrats Bob on first place win ...another dynamic write luv,,
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/20/2011 9:40:00 PM
Thank you Linda-Marie
Date: 11/20/2011 4:26:00 PM
Bob a great job on your free vers, Congrats on you worthy place. Agape, Moses
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/20/2011 9:40:00 PM
Much appreciated John
Date: 11/20/2011 4:02:00 PM
What a lovey poem on the last of the day and its beauty. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/20/2011 9:41:00 PM
Appreciate your comments Joyce
Date: 11/18/2011 11:44:00 PM
Bob. I think this is one of the most beautiful of your poems I have ever read! (second stanza,line 1 "its" without apostrophe). I have got to fave this gem!!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/19/2011 7:57:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for picking up on the error and your gracious comments.
Date: 11/18/2011 6:57:00 PM
Bob, I love the way you describe the colors on the snowy fields. Also enjoyed the personification of the sun in the second verse. This is beautifully written! Love, Carolyn
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/18/2011 10:19:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn. Your comments are very much appreciated.
Date: 11/18/2011 11:11:00 AM
Wonderful imagery, I love the color use in the third line and the adjectives in the first two lines are a great setup. Also it speaks to the bitter and bleak feeling of winter but captures its beauty as well.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/18/2011 2:07:00 PM
Very kind comments Tim. Thank you

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