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Winter's Dream

* * Brilliant bright billowing snow * * drifts in dancing fantasies, * * winking lustrous lights aglow, * * winter's wondrous dream. * * * * 11/09/15

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/19/2015 5:31:00 PM

Winters come and winters go but this work will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

James Inman
Date: 11/19/2015 8:56:00 PM

Sweet comment Sara. Thank you.

Daver Austin

Date: 11/18/2015 9:59:00 AM

"Winking, lustrous lights aglow," I like this description of snowy winters evening. Love, daver

James Inman
Date: 11/18/2015 10:25:00 AM

Thanks Daver.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2015 4:10:00 PM

thanks for visiting so many of my poems today. You are a wonderful friend. Miss the emails!! Hope you are doing well.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2015 4:10:00 PM

Let me know if I missed any of your earlier poetry, will you?

James Inman
Date: 11/17/2015 5:32:00 PM

Andrea, I think you've read most of them. I don't have that many, but if I find one I'll let you know. It would take me years to read all of yours.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/17/2015 6:33:00 AM

fast becoming a fan! beautiful wintry dodoitsu, alliteration used to great effect - congrats on your win in the contest! :)

James Inman
Date: 11/17/2015 6:57:00 AM

Charlotte, thanks for the wonderful comment, already a fan of yours.

Skat A

Date: 11/14/2015 7:47:00 AM

Hi James, Congratulations on your "Winter Dodoitsu Win." Luv SKAT

James Inman
Date: 11/17/2015 6:56:00 AM

Hi SKAT, thank you.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/14/2015 5:49:00 AM

James, love the touch of snow... the format, alliteration and imagery! BIG CONGRATULATIONS on the win!~Olive Eloisa =`)

James Inman
Date: 11/17/2015 6:55:00 AM

Thanks Olive, always love to hear from you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2015 9:10:00 PM

Glad to see you won. You deserved it, my friend. Congratulations.

James Inman
Date: 11/17/2015 6:54:00 AM

Thank you Andrea.

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/13/2015 8:22:00 PM

A lovely write, James, and I love how you formatted it! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

James Inman
Date: 11/17/2015 6:53:00 AM

Oh, no my reply disappeared! Sorry Kim! Thank you for the kind words.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/13/2015 2:43:00 PM

Delightful James and I love the snowflakes too - very clever touch:-) congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman
Date: 11/14/2015 6:09:00 PM

Thank you Jan.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 11/13/2015 11:55:00 AM

Dear James Simply lovely, and inspirational although this is not my favorite time of year I enjoyed reading this work of yours, love the images you've put into your readers minds. I think I will come back and enjoy reading this one once again, it's refreshing and perfect for the winter season to come, and thanks for the comment on my poetry also, cheri

James Inman
Date: 11/13/2015 1:20:00 PM

Thank you again.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 11/12/2015 3:52:00 PM

I feel as though I just received my first Xmas card of the year and it is delightful and light hearted! CayCay

James Inman
Date: 11/12/2015 6:52:00 PM

Please, by all means accept it as such and have a very, very Merry Christmas, CayCay. With well wishes to your family. Thank you.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/12/2015 2:18:00 PM

Ahh!! So Creative..Reads like a winner..Way to go..It is only a dream for those who have to deal with the bad part of those snowflakes..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

James Inman
Date: 11/12/2015 2:50:00 PM

Sara, snow and ice can be horrible, thanks for the comment.