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Winter Wish

Dreary, freezing Winter days Stuck inside A gloomy haze Nowhere to go Nothing to see Just as bored As bored can be Sitting still Is getting old Would go outside But it's too cold Wish for summer Spring or fall Anything to Ease this lull

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/17/2011 6:20:00 PM
Enjoyed the succinct lines you employ here, Spanish Rose (love your name!) you sure bring forth your message well here, btw just want to help there's a missing "o" in too in line 4, stanza 3 -- enjoyed your write :)
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Date: 7/17/2011 6:18:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share creative poetry as this piece with luv...
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