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Winter has stolen the night, A world I have always known, is lost in a blanket of snow, .... with recognition adrift, and thrown tossed away in the endless white I gaze over landscapes, whitewashed in the moonlight Strange bittersweet etchings of silver starlight Trees reaching high, with wild naked limbs, Each branch empty handed, their twigs opened wide grasping for snow flakes...or something to find Something familiar, that's been left behind Drifts growing higher, while icicles glimmer distorting the mirrors of stars from the night I know that the moon is hiding, somewhere, caught in the winter's snow of sleep Bemused are the clouds while obscuring the light, disguising the image we once knew at sight My world flickers dim, bleaching the ground, Taking my breath, until all words are gone I cannot recall, I cannot rewind, all the old music that I've known so well I strain to hear where summer dwelled, too thin to be recalled Where all the autumn leaves once fell Where seasons green wore flowered hills They must disappear, with each thing we have known, Bleached by the moon, until they are pale Stars then will spin, and seasons will dim But, then all the reasons for believing begins .... Winter has stolen the night, tonight, and the world I've always known is l o s t .... in the sparkling snow, adrift in the timeless wind. _______________________________________________________ Written for contest: A Winter Poem Judged 12/4/16 Resubmitted for Contest: 2/6/17 Form G or N/A Sponsor: Broken Wings

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Date: 2/11/2017 7:29:00 PM
Carrie congratulations on first place in my contest with this beautiful poem ~
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Date: 2/11/2017 11:55:00 AM
Great poem and especially appreciated now (it's snowing here). Congratulations Carrie! :-)
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Date: 2/11/2017 3:29:00 AM
wow, i love this poem, very glad you were placed this time :) Congratulations!
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Date: 2/9/2017 6:36:00 AM
Great work Carrie, congratulations...
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Date: 2/8/2017 1:21:00 PM
Just beautiful, Carrie! Congrats on top win! 7
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Date: 2/8/2017 10:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win....beautiful write!
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Date: 2/8/2017 2:50:00 AM
This is breathtaking, Carrie:) congratulations on your well deserved win:) a 7:)
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Date: 1/23/2017 1:15:00 PM
Brilliant...just...brilliant! Love your poetry what great talent you have been blessed with. Your poems oft leave me breathless. A Fav!
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Date: 1/11/2017 7:50:00 AM
Great write Carrie, you been gone too long...x Ian
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Date: 12/7/2016 8:54:00 AM
Hi Carrie, What a contrast in styles between yours and one of Ruben's that i happened to read just before this. I like the simplicity of this one as much as i like Ruben's depth.
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Date: 12/3/2016 9:25:00 AM
Carrie, this one swirled around me like the first snow...especially like the lines "It flickers dim, bleaching the night" and "a summer dims, too thin to be recalled". Just a beautifully written picture of a snowy night.
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Date: 12/2/2016 11:00:00 PM
Beautiful imagery so richly delivered by your free verse which is a joy to read - always ... CayCay
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