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Winter Has Broken

Winter has broken and the bought roses have lost their scent. It is the crossroads of the seasons. The beams will heal, surely not fail. It is time to pound on the road again, time to escape the demon. Some new demon awaits, crawling in the desert. There is no peace. After the rescue attempt which failed, everyone stood and murmured, throwing petals of dried roses to the current. The river ate them. It was a small tribute, compared to a mighty yearning for more of life before the day is captured.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/7/2022 1:49:00 PM
Quite a thought provoking write, Bill. You lead with the chill of winter + drooping roses to a rescue unsuccessful that conveys life lost. The rose petals from stanza one are powerfully picked up as a petaled memorial to a lost soul. A most intriguing poem. Cheers, Brian
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Bill Yates
Date: 10/7/2022 3:49:00 PM
Thank you Brian.
Date: 3/20/2015 1:44:00 AM
So very good, Bill. "...a mighty yearning for more of life...."
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