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Winter Haiku

frozen form. . . a bird cries out for his mate

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/4/2017 11:59:00 PM

Connie, I wanted a taste of your earlier writes and I found this sad gem. Such a beautiful haiku. A tender and moving Haiku. A snapshot of sadness wonderfully expressed. Enjoyed!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 11/5/2017 10:03:00 AM

Thank you Susan. I appreciate your insightful comment. Winter can be harsh for animals in nature. : )

Paul Callus

Date: 11/26/2015 3:03:00 PM

Hi Connie..came to have a peep at one of your early contributions to Soup, and found this lovely, yet sad haiku. Sorry for this poor bird and all other people who suffer winter's chilly effects. #7 Regards // paul

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/1/2015 10:57:00 PM

frozen in time..Love Connie>>>rajat

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/5/2015 2:32:00 AM

It is so sad to see a bird without its mate. Thank you Rajat. Cheers, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2013 9:58:00 PM

I remember this sad one, Connie. I came way back here to tell you thanks for your comment to me. As for how I do it, I guess I am not as good as you at being a grandma!! You are more maternal than I am. I get more pleasure from poetry sites , which reminds me, I really do need to visit the grandkids. Hyrums' Bday is coming up soon. that's good

Skat A

Date: 7/21/2013 9:25:00 AM

Connie, I like this awesome write. Congrats, on having your poem featured on the soups home page. Have yourself a nice day. LUV* ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/21/2013 8:39:00 AM

Connie, Congratulations on your featured poem of the week. enjoy life with smiles :-) love <3 LINDA

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 7/16/2013 2:53:00 PM

Congrats on the featured haiku.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/2/2012 10:41:00 PM

also, connie, I see you are commenting on several of my p oems. So sweet of you. I will go to PFT and post some of them there. I just keep putting it off and I have so many now that I can post over there!! As usual, my back as sore. I just want to get off now. I think I will post a contest first. there are four contests I want to do poems for . GEEEEZ

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/2/2012 10:40:00 PM

connie I came way back here to find one of yours I'd never seen and lo and behold I actually found one, it was this little winter haiku. So sad. I think I saw the video on which this could have been based!!

Constance La France

Date: 2/13/2010 2:47:00 PM

I "can" hear the bird.. wonderful image you paint with words.. keep the pen flowing, dear heart.... Constance

James Fraser

Date: 1/21/2010 3:36:00 PM

Kool wintry Haiku Connie >> brrrrrrr >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/5/2010 3:53:00 AM

Thank you for sharing you wonderful poetry with us today Connie. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. Love, Carol