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Winter Fog

. Damp cold fog rolls through the opening in hedge like a Coke shaken pouring

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Stephen Parker

Date: 11/30/2010 12:11:00 PM

Shaken and poured! I can see the misty fizz emanating from your Coke can! Good, vivid imagery! Keep the imagination percolating!

Mari Sloan

Date: 11/26/2010 12:49:00 AM

:-) It's good to see you, too, Sara. I'm very familiar with the fizz of shaken Coke, and Southern hedges.

Anthony Nutter

Date: 11/25/2010 3:56:00 AM

Excellent vivid metaphor. Nice piece.

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 11/25/2010 3:50:00 AM

Thnx Sara for visiting my work "Emptiness camouflaging along with feelings " and leaving encouraging comments.... ....Luv/best wishes..... Hitendra Mehta

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/24/2010 4:14:00 PM

Happy thanksgiving day, Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/24/2010 11:36:00 AM

Giving you thanks for sharing your poetry here at PoetrySoup. Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours Sara. Love,Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/24/2010 11:21:00 AM

Awesome description of fog, Sara, in your excellent monoku. Best wishes for a wonderful Thanksgiving. Peace and blessings, Carolyn

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 11/24/2010 6:33:00 AM

Interesting metaphor here, Sara. Beautifully written. Have a great holiday! Dan C

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/24/2010 4:35:00 AM

how descriptive this can get with a charming ending.. shhh, i'm a coke addict, sara... thanks for visiting my pace with huugs ofr you.. warmst, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2010 7:01:00 PM

You mean when you shake it and it foams and sprays out. I can see that, SAra. Nicely done. WE are expecting blizzard tonight. I got a phone call from the city to keep streets clear for snow removal! EEEK LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2010 6:17:00 PM

thankxxx Sara.. Soup Mail..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2010 5:09:00 PM

Nice imagery in this Monoku Sara.. could just see that fog rolling in and that coke pouring when shaken.. vivid..luv.. Soup Mail..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/23/2010 2:48:00 PM

Wonderful images you have penned in this Monoku