Winter Day

inside to play winter gray sky the day seems sad

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/29/2013 10:03:00 AM

hello Barbara, Congratulations, :)on having your poem Featured on the Soups Home Page.... enjoy your coming week. always~ LINDA .

Daver Austin

Date: 9/28/2013 9:12:00 AM

As I get older winter does have a sobering effect. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Zoe Isaacson

Date: 9/23/2013 4:31:00 PM

Pretty poem love how its written you should check me out. I'm new on the page.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/23/2013 8:29:00 AM

Well there you are Barbara. nice to see a familiar name and a wonderful poetess on this site . Loive your poem. so simple yet describes the day and feelings of up and down and reasons in so few words. thanks for sharing

Christopher Bunton

Date: 12/19/2011 6:59:00 PM

I like this.

Jack Horne

Date: 11/13/2011 1:01:00 PM

I just love days like that, Barbara. I guess I'm strange, LOL. Enjoyed your description of what we call a grey day

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2011 8:20:00 PM

very enjoyable....p.d.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/12/2011 1:50:00 PM

that is exactly how today is and I just finished commenting on the dreary day---yes it does seem sad. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2011 12:29:00 PM

GOOD one. I can so relate to this, especially how I felt when a child.

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/12/2011 12:15:00 PM

I can't wait for Summer on my side BG, you painted a winter day so aptly.. WN