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Winter Commute

The train was stuck; The tracks were icy. Weather cold; Conditions dicey. Stops and starts Made travel slow. Patience was The way to go. Home at last, Relieved but spent And wond'ring where The hours went.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/3/2015 2:05:00 PM
Well crafted Ilene. It shows great control.
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Date: 2/2/2015 10:14:00 PM
Well I hope you wrote this poem during this time. That would have made you almost grateful for the whole ordeal. Peace. :)
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