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Winter Blues

It is a cold dull and dreary day the sun alas hidden by clouds to lighten my heart not a single ray it feels like being wrapped in shrouds The radio is playing the blues which suits my mood just fine I watch the fire as the pot stews maybe I will feel better after I dine Closing the curtains against a day that is best forgot. I head for bed knowing a fresh dawn is on it's way and the sun might paint the world red 01/02/2014 contest Winter Blues

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Date: 1/3/2014 6:54:00 PM
There is something comforting about sitting in a house with a warm bowl of soup when it is cold outside.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/3/2014 8:20:00 PM
yes Rick or a mug of strong hot coffee or cocoa ty Shadow x smile hug
Date: 1/2/2014 10:09:00 PM
that last line is awesome. To have the sun appear and chase those blues away. I love that image.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/3/2014 8:19:00 PM
hi Andrea hope springs eternal ty Shadow x smile hug
Date: 1/2/2014 6:53:00 PM
I love the picture you have painted.....tinged in blue.....and even the radio plays along with your blue world. Well done, Shadow! Happy New Year!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/3/2014 8:17:00 PM
a true blue feeling lol Carrie ty shadow x smile hug
Date: 1/2/2014 6:30:00 PM
An awesome winter blues poem Shadow..good luck...:-) :-)
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/3/2014 8:11:00 PM
ty Donna you too shadow x smile hug
Date: 1/2/2014 2:55:00 PM
Nice descriptiveness and accompanying rhyming in this piece. I feel a bit the same right now.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/2/2014 3:29:00 PM
hi Robert winter is fun at the start but soon dulls. The trick is to turn on a sun lamp and day dream of tropical shores ty for reading Shadow x smile hug

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