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Winter Blessing

WINTER BLESSING While sitting in the cold and peeking out, Intrepid as the snow lay 'round about, No sight melted my heart, like what I saw, Than one red bird who lit without a flaw. Each feather fluffed and puffed against the cold Resembling a red ball to catch and hold. Believing in this sign of which I'm told: Love transcends all of time and ages old; Each moment that a red bird visits you, Someone in Heaven's thoughts are bleeding through, So you will know their heart and love's still true In spite of everything you're going through No matter what, they're always there for you, Giving you hope...beyond their last adieu. deborah burch©12.26.16 _______________________________________ Form: Acrostic (with couplet rhyme 14lines / 10 syllables each line; iambic)

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Date: 1/6/2017 4:58:00 PM
A very beautiful acrostic Deb congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/4/2017 6:50:00 PM
A lovely Acrostic, Deborah. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Deborah Burch
Date: 1/5/2017 10:25:00 PM
Thank you Sandra!! Big Hugggs. Deb
Date: 1/4/2017 3:12:00 PM
Congratulations Deborah, great acrostic.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 1/4/2017 6:39:00 PM
Thank you Roy for your kindness!! Big hugs!! Deb
Date: 1/4/2017 2:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Beborah, very good acrostic . :) Hug Eve
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Deborah Burch
Date: 1/4/2017 6:39:00 PM
Thank you Eve!! Lol. Big Hugggs!! Beb;)
Date: 1/4/2017 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Deborah. :)
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Deborah Burch
Date: 1/4/2017 6:38:00 PM
Thank you Julia!! Big Hugggs. Deb
Date: 1/4/2017 12:15:00 PM
Beautiful, Deborah. Congrats on your win!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 1/4/2017 6:37:00 PM
Thank you Agnes!!;) big hugs. Deb
Date: 1/4/2017 11:33:00 AM
Deborah, thank you so much for entering your GREAT poem in my contest. Judging was quite a challenge! Congratulations on your win. Janice ,
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Deborah Burch
Date: 1/4/2017 11:54:00 AM
Thank you dear Janice for your inspirational contest!! I am so grateful!! Big Hugggs. Deb
Date: 12/27/2016 10:43:00 AM
Right on, Deb - it fits so well together, and it just plain fits!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 12/27/2016 1:53:00 PM
LOL!! Thank you Doug!!! Lol!! Big Hugggs. Deb
Date: 12/26/2016 1:42:00 PM
This was gorgeous Deb. I had not heard that about the red bird (which I assume is what I would call a cardinal) I have many cardinals that visit my property every winter, but maybe because I have so many birdfeeders around. :) You poem is wonderfully written and really paints a beautiful picture.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 12/26/2016 1:49:00 PM
LOL!! Thank you Chris!! Yes it's the cardinal here too.

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