Winter

Rising well before dawns first light, Driving through tunnels of trees. Bedecked with frost shining bright I miss the sight of this winter frieze. © Dave Timperley 2012

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Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 11/30/2012 12:07:00 PM

Great write! I love your use of the word "frieze" Bravo!

Dave Timperley
Date: 11/30/2012 12:44:00 PM

Well spotted Jon, it was a deliberate usage. Thanks for stopping by. God Bless. D. ps bravo in greek apparently means brilliant!!

Lillie Williams

Date: 11/29/2012 2:06:00 PM

This is so descriptive. I can see it as well. Thanks for giving me a very beautiful reading.

Dave Timperley
Date: 11/30/2012 2:15:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by Lillie. England call it a hoare frost and we do not get it here in Cyprus. God Bless. D.

Tanya Harrington

Date: 11/29/2012 1:26:00 PM

It is a beautiful sight. :) Tanya

Dave Timperley
Date: 11/30/2012 2:17:00 AM

I'm told that a picture is worth a thousand words but sometimes only a few can work magic on the senses.Thanks for stopping by Tanya. God Bless.