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Winter

Even now I blink as the hopes Flutter past, away from me, Wintry gusts pull the early dark in, No arms around me as the Heavy skies throw the chills at me, Making me ill.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/3/2009 2:33:00 PM
Sarah, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/12/2009 4:47:00 PM
A rather dark, stark image. Well, spring is fighting its way through. Winter snows don't last forever. "He who sows in sorrow shall reap in joy". It says that somewhere in the Bible. Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/10/2009 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals Sarah. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/30/2009 12:34:00 PM
And you my dear, no surprise to me, as I also know if you were you able to enter three they would all be thru the first round too! Congratulations and good luck! Thanks for your thoughtful comment. Hope life is good. Mine is super crazy! Hugs, me xoxo
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Date: 3/26/2009 9:24:00 AM
congrats on having your poem "Winter" featured this week! keep up the good work!
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Date: 3/26/2009 8:25:00 AM
Congrats Sarah, on your blank verse "Winter" being featured. Vince
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Date: 3/26/2009 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week with this beautifully written but heartbreaking write. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/25/2009 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/25/2009 8:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured. Great job! Kirstie
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Date: 3/23/2009 1:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem I hope the day see's you well ! Laura :)
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Date: 3/23/2009 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem! The dark days are almost over once again...hooray!! love, Carrie
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Date: 3/23/2009 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations on the featuring of this poem today, thank God for spring, I wrap you in its love.
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Date: 3/23/2009 7:54:00 AM
Sarah, good on yer for this fine feature! this poem makes me gulp a couple times, nice emotion, Jim
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Date: 3/23/2009 6:04:00 AM
Congrats on being featured!
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Date: 3/22/2009 5:52:00 PM
Sarah, Sarah, where are you? How are you? Such a heavy emotional poem. Congrats on being featured sweet friend. I miss you!!! Hope all is well. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/6/2008 1:08:00 PM
I will throw my arms around you, and warm you. Hope you can feel it. I feel your sadness, as we have all been there from time to time. I feel it deeply, for your write it too well. Love, hugs, lighter, brighter days for beautiful you. Love always, Shar xoxo
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