Wings

a troubled soul I work to depart soon no need for legs I drop my arms and grow a pair of wings to fly the sky

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Kathleen Kroll

Date: 4/6/2016 4:16:00 PM

Love the imagery. Leaves you thinking and wondering... Good work! Kathy

Michelle James

Date: 4/5/2016 4:51:00 PM

Full spirit, nice write.

Funom Makama

Date: 4/28/2015 9:04:00 AM

Reading through your words gives a majestic result of creating expectations and at the same time meeting them. This is awesome considering the feat achieved in a few lines. Great write friend and please keep on letting your heart speak for us to learn and enjoy. A def 7

Catherine Labeau
Date: 4/28/2015 1:15:00 PM

thank you I am new at this as english is my third language thank you as only started a year ago thank you with pride I go will look for yours friend