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Winged Wonder

radiant spectrum what is this flying wonder attention captured a chrysalis yesterday now winged creature emerges “my pollen’s sweetest,” petunia attempts to lure throughout the garden blossoms seek her brief visits the butterfly flutters by to her fans, she bows bestows butterfly kisses captivating all beauty flies, accepts applause enjoying admiration
*Written May 19, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/4/2014 1:31:00 PM
This is lovely, Carolyn. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 6/4/2014 7:08:00 AM
Carolyn, congratulations on a beautiful, well-deserved win!!! Kind regards.
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Date: 6/4/2014 6:51:00 AM
Sensational Tanka's that totally capture the beauty and magesty of the butterfly. Many congrats on your win, Carolyn bfn Lainie
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Date: 6/4/2014 6:43:00 AM
Very artistic write and a fine win, Congrats my friend!!
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Date: 6/4/2014 2:28:00 AM
Congrats on the fine win, Carolyn. What's it like to come in first? lol
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Date: 6/3/2014 10:14:00 PM
Amazing write Carolyn ! wonderfully captured tender images ,,loved this read ,, congrats on top win !
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Date: 6/3/2014 8:15:00 PM
A very elegant write of the mysteries and the wonder of the butterfly. Just beautiful, Carolyn! Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 6/3/2014 7:49:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Carolyn
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Date: 5/23/2014 6:07:00 AM
so dreamily beautiful Carolyn an excellent pen hugs
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Date: 5/21/2014 11:10:00 AM
Not one butterfly out here yet. I have my flowers planted so just waiting for this winged creature. Lovely poem with the feel of spring. love phyl
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Date: 5/19/2014 11:03:00 PM
I felt the butterflies fluttering across my heart reading this , Beautiful.
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Date: 5/19/2014 7:34:00 PM
a very nice piece with a poetic vibes on life cycle...
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Date: 5/19/2014 6:48:00 PM
A beautiful picture you painted of the butterfly in your garden...hugs Tim
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