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Wine and Woman

She's as smooth as glass With gentle curves. A fine crystal that sings With a moistened touch. She's a sweet moscato or riesling With bubbles that giggle when she smiles. Or maybe a mellow red That leaves a taste that asks for more. She warms my heart and soul And shows me new steps on the floor. Her sweet plump fruits catch my eyes And caress me through the night. Tomorrow she will welcome me again. A love affair and not a sin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/24/2018 2:06:00 AM
Hi Ray, it is a beautiful writing. you have compared the woman with glass beautifully
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Date: 10/11/2015 8:10:00 PM
Well done, but the correct spelling of the German grape is RIESling. / M
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Date: 9/10/2015 10:07:00 PM
wow, I LOVE this. Was it in the wine contest. If so, I don't see any congrats on it, but it is just wonderful.
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Ray Dillard
Date: 9/10/2015 10:18:00 PM
It must not have made the cut. But, thanks for the kind comment. It soothes my ego. I'll check for results.
Date: 9/9/2015 7:38:00 PM
Excellent write Ray. Seductive but with a nice balance......Tim
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