Window

About to open The green and yellow window Unguarded moment Serves spontaneous drops of Blue and red water from sky __________________________ 19/10/2016

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Afzal Nusker

Date: 10/20/2016 11:17:00 PM

The contrast is amazing.

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/21/2016 4:56:00 AM

Thank you ...

Paloma P

Date: 10/19/2016 4:41:00 PM

I'm wondering if the colors signify anything in particular or you just picked them randomly, colorful Tanka. :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/19/2016 10:06:00 PM

If the Colors are signifying nothing, it is never a tanka ... No tanka is possible without figures of speech ... perhaps so ... I am posting another one in continuation ... Thank you for the stimulus ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/19/2016 7:25:00 AM

A masterful Tanka dear, Probir!

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/19/2016 11:13:00 AM

Thank you ...

White Wolf

Date: 10/19/2016 7:15:00 AM

A very well done tanka, I had to look up tanka first mind you, Ha. Interesting form. And you nailed it Probir. Inspiring mate. /|\

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/19/2016 11:13:00 AM

Thank you ...