Windblown Melodies

A wink Eyes a sparkling Dancing upon the wind Blowing melodies that teases His lips To part Into a smile His feet begin to jive To her windblown melodies rythm, Heartbeat.

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James Foulk

Date: 5/28/2011 9:51:00 AM

really enjoy reading your beautiful poetry and your different forms you use, and this one was a joy to read. thank you for commenting on Dear Sister. yes I am going to send her a copy, I tryed calling her, but no answer, will try again, but she was a very dear sister and still is.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2011 10:49:00 AM

I am spending my morning reading wonderful poetry and enjoying it so much. I am so impressed with the poems I have read so far this morning. I am happy yours was among them Caroline. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/18/2011 9:36:00 AM

a lilting piece of poetry like a song Caroline with uplifting lines... very creative flare u have my friend for this fantastic romantic poetry ..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/18/2011 5:41:00 AM

Passionate write with equally passionate images, caroline

Don Johnson

Date: 5/18/2011 1:52:00 AM

Great poem methinks... Caroline-Cecile seduction neat... guy caught in a tender trap... flirtation cute the trap a beaut... has fallen in her lap... heartbeat does flutter weak... xo Don

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/18/2011 12:54:00 AM

This JIVES. It's so cool, Caroline.