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Wind Storm

the torrential rain fall the cataclysmic wind seeks and destroy everything in it's path has been ravaged by the storm

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Michael Degenhardt

Date: 10/23/2008 9:34:00 AM

A lot of details and the words flow naturally and smoothly making for a zvery good read. Michael

Dawn Kilby

Date: 10/23/2008 8:35:00 AM

a picture that is vividly painted ;P

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 10/20/2008 3:39:00 PM

Lovely write Deneen. Nature, that most precious of all beauties, can be so unforgiving when she unleashes the fullness of her power. Am I right in thinking that we write almost as much about lost love as we do about love, yet we write very little about the darker side of nature than we do about its beauty? Love, Nigel

James Foulk

Date: 10/20/2008 3:21:00 PM

yes such a tragic thing to happen. you wrote this in vivid detail.

Chitra Lakhera

Date: 10/20/2008 5:49:00 AM

Ahhh so terrible! Now this reminds me of Tsunami. Yes everything was destroyed. The loss can't ever be overcome. Sometimes nature's so unwilling and so are the humans. Honest one! Love, Chitra

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/20/2008 5:40:00 AM

The poor souls affected by mother nature's fury. My heart goes out to anyone caught in her path of destruction. Truthful and scary write. Love, Shar

Adell Foster

Date: 10/19/2008 9:05:00 PM

The visuals of this write are quite vivid indeed, I kept watch on Ike as he went on a seek and destroy mission in Texas... He blew a hole in top of my brothers roof... I am thankful that all were safe... Thank you for sharing the read my friend. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Christopher Higgins

Date: 10/19/2008 4:57:00 PM

The wind of a storm or the wind in our life can all be so destructive. Nice picture painted.

Lena W

Date: 10/19/2008 1:54:00 PM

So true, as im a true Floridian that came by way of hurricanes. I can only look back now and thank for what i have to look forward too. Lena

Michael Torres

Date: 10/19/2008 12:59:00 PM

Start praying thats all you have left. Great write so true. Michael

P Sheart

Date: 10/19/2008 11:07:00 AM

Hi Sweet Sure gets me to thinking about all who have been affected by the huricanes etc. Heartwrenching and very profound. Excellent! Take care, Love Light Truth Patricia