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Wind of Discontent

There's a westerly wind that sweeps down the shore Riding roughshod, through the furrowed maze Plowing the seas with a lofty oar To justify each thrashing wave Unwilling to pulse with calmer mood Her temperament bodes malcontent Unrelentingly, earnest, she herds her brood And prods them along with grave torment Rendering helpless, behind the spray The sun watches with solemn round While quivering waters define dismay She holds long the seasonal sound From the sphere of the dawn, into bold afternoon She is schooled by the whims of the moon ____________________________________________________ 9/15/13 For Poetess Darkly's Contest: "Sonnets of the Wind"

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Date: 10/2/2013 12:46:00 PM
congrads on your win
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Date: 10/1/2013 8:28:00 PM
lovely seeing you on the winning list...SKAT
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Date: 9/29/2013 7:09:00 PM
one can feel the ebb and flow of the ocean through your words...beautifully inked...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/29/2013 12:41:00 PM
Gorgeous piece! Congratulations.
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Date: 9/29/2013 8:40:00 AM
Swept away Carrie....awesome.....congratulations
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Date: 9/17/2013 7:48:00 PM
What an awesome write Carrie! This poem could be used to teach, just outstanding!
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Date: 9/17/2013 5:11:00 PM
Another great sonneteer at Soup and it's CARRIE. VERY nicely done, Carrie. It flows so well and the language is not forced.
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Date: 9/17/2013 4:51:00 PM
The flow of this poem is just beautiful, Carrie! I also love the rhyme scheme that you used, I write most of my rhyming poems in the same way. It seems to be a rare writing style. Excellent work on this piece!...Thank you for the kind comments. They mean so much to me!
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Date: 9/15/2013 9:45:00 PM
Beautifully done. A very powerful ending.
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Date: 9/15/2013 7:46:00 PM
From the sphere of the dawn,into bold afternoon/She is schooled by the whims of the moon-Fantastic these lines are and magnificent each verse dearest Carrie.
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