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Wind Acrostrain

Wisps of warmth on Autumn breeze licks my face tasting me, tickling my skin. Inseparable are we, your breath filled lips I ignore as you tease me. Nonsensical words you whisper to me, I feel the ire that soon ensues, demon tempest you become, I laugh at you, as your caress sets me free. 10/24/15

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Date: 12/11/2015 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations James.
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Date: 12/10/2015 1:14:00 PM
James, Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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James Inman
Date: 12/10/2015 1:33:00 PM
Thanks SKAT.
Date: 12/9/2015 10:34:00 PM
Very wonderful write James.. congrats on great win!
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James Inman
Date: 12/10/2015 9:01:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Sharma.
Date: 11/11/2015 7:27:00 PM
wow, you did a wonderful personification poem here. Love the way you did this. By the way, Jan is gonna be super strict on titles. I think she just wanted you to choose the one element and write it , for example, as Wind Acrostrain. But I could be wrong about that. (but that is the only way a sweet poem like this could fail to make the list!)
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Date: 10/24/2015 7:22:00 PM
his is unique and very appealing take. I read it three times to get all of it. A7 Good luck i the contest.
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James Inman
Date: 10/24/2015 8:10:00 PM
Thank you Robert.

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