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Willow

By the glist’ning lake, a fair Willow once stood On a lush bed of grass under a sapphire sky. There her graceful arms danced in the wind And gleamed like stars in their brightest hours. ’Twas there where her soft song seeped through the hills. How the birds would fall quiet, and the streams stand still! All nature would listen to her sweeping tune. So fair she was, but as the years passed by, The Willow’s beauty vanished, Her beaming smile faded And the sparkle in her eyes died. Her heart grew heavy, her arms sunk lower. No longer could she gaze into the glass of the lake; No longer could she sing, only weep and weep. How cruel time is! How He stole her youth, burdened her with age; Mocked her flaws, and wrinkled her face! Abandoned by the birds, she grieved alone. Only Death took pity on the poor Willow. Now silence fills the desolate wood, For all that remains is a stump where she stood.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/9/2017 1:20:00 PM
Can you believe it, I read this today! BEAUTIFUL. Time is the enemy that hides within.....
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Erica Rose
Date: 9/10/2017 1:13:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 9/12/2016 2:41:00 PM
Congrats on your winning placement. Not all parting gifts are happy ones. Good work and a reminder that "Time" must be respected and valued.
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Erica Rose
Date: 9/12/2016 5:47:00 PM
thank you!
Date: 9/3/2016 1:45:00 PM
Congrats Jasmine on your finest position and beautiful poem! Balveen
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Erica Rose
Date: 9/3/2016 3:11:00 PM
thank you!
Date: 9/2/2016 4:16:00 PM
So wonderful to share the winners’ list with your great poetry..Congrats on awesome work..Sara
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Erica Rose
Date: 9/2/2016 5:21:00 PM
thank you Sara!
Date: 9/2/2016 11:54:00 AM
Wonderful write...awesome perspective...Congrats :) Sunita
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Erica Rose
Date: 9/2/2016 5:21:00 PM
Thank you Sunita!
Date: 9/2/2016 7:59:00 AM
Congrats Jasmine, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Erica Rose
Date: 9/2/2016 8:07:00 AM
thank you!!

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