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Will You Lie Down

Eileen  Manassian Avatar Eileen  Manassian - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Will You Lie Down which was written by poet Eileen Manassian. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Will You Lie Down

She has made your bed
Satin word sheets and pillows
Will you now lie down?

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 8/16/2013 10:43:00 AM
    this is an awesome confirmation to what Richard's poem says about you. I just read his superb homage for you. That was a treat!

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 11:19:00 AM
    Eileen; no man in his right mind would refuse. Thanks for sharing..... lucilla

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 8/15/2013 11:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, my dear....I guess not! :) Then this lady is lucky! How are you, my dear? Hope all is well. HUGS!
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 10:18:00 AM
    This sounds normal, woman makes plans and expects man to comply, the question sounds familiar too lol. Take care, Richard

    Seal Avatar Richard D Seal
    Date: 8/16/2013 6:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Send me a copy, it sounds interesting reading lol
    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 8/15/2013 11:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes... a man's job is to hunt, bring in the food, protect, provide, nurture, cherish, satisfy, AND comply to her every wish!!! Didn't anybody give you the manual, Mr Seal???? Take care.....
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 7:43:00 AM
    As Richard said "Beautiful in it's simplicity" Couldn't have said it better my sweet friend! Big warm hugs coming your way Teach xoxox

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 8/15/2013 11:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    XOXOXOXOXOXOXO Right back at ya, Kenny! Hope you are having a good night in dream land and will wake up to a great day where you will write a couple more funny ones to keep us smiling!
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 7:39:00 AM
    May one lie in the bed they made...deep senryu.

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 8/15/2013 11:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Drake! Yes, we make our beds and then we have to lie in them!!! If the bed is made for the right person, then whatever happens there is SWEET...including the dreams which come later! There are many ways to seduce...for poets and poetesses...words are the all time driving force and one must be careful! We are prone to be taken in by the beauty of the words and are wooed, sometimes to the wrong bed! Hope all is well with you, my dear!
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 6:48:00 AM
    Beautiful in it's simplicity, have a great day Eileen.

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 8/15/2013 11:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Richard. Beautiful is an adjective that I love! Have a great restful night. See you in the morning!
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 5:32:00 AM
    This is a glorious write my friend! I love the satin word sheets and covers, so very clever! I truly loved reading this wonderful poem this morning! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 8/15/2013 11:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Russell! Glad to have you stop by again! Hope all is well. Clever, eh? I'm glad then. All the best.
  1. Date: 8/15/2013 3:25:00 AM
    - It's beautiful, Eileen! - All the best to you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 8/15/2013 11:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, dear sweet Anne Lise....Hugs to you! Have a wonderful day!