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Widows' Walk

She waits, and Oh so patiently! every day she looks, ("Oh, might I gloat?") for sight of that one trawler, 'The Forever,' cresting waves, he, wildly cursing, all the while he's still afloat, and every day she moans, "Oh, may he never..." Nails bitten to the quick, worrying her apron string or some small piece of fabric; she's constantly in hope the weather's kind, carelessly cleaning candlesticks, she fiddles with her wedding ring to occupy her mind. The ocean seethed, and then it settled, roared once more, its fury unrestrain'd. The sea and Mary sharing mixed emotions, would he wave, or would he wander? chain'd in brute defiance, shamed if all his catch were empty hull and broken promises. A prideful man was he, and never satisfied 'til he had stretched his nets to overflowing. As much tied to Neptune's rhythms as her rhyme, and sometimes even more so, he'd struggle 'gainst all odds before he'd quit, but it was time; time to raise the sails, admit he's bested, and plot a course for Mary, fair and frail, but cruel weather proved his blind undoing, his compass broke, he couldn't see for hail, his boat a mass of many splinter'd pieces, he tried to make it home, to no avail. Mary saw the wreck upended on the shoreline, and saw the name 'Forever' on its side, "wait," she cried, "I will not live without you, forever in your arms I must abide!" She cast herself from off the highest landing and was borne off with the ebbing of the tide.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/16/2015 4:36:00 PM
Congratulations on Poem of the Day
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/17/2015 5:11:00 AM
Thanks Judy! Best wishes, Keith
Date: 12/16/2015 2:38:00 PM
Congratulations on poem of the day with this beauty
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/17/2015 5:12:00 AM
Thanks B.W! Much appreciated... best wishes, Keith
Date: 12/16/2015 12:10:00 PM
Hi Keith: Simply put, I was in awe of this poignant worded poem that read like classic poetry. My compliments!
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Date: 12/17/2015 5:20:00 AM
Many thanks my friend... I am so grateful for your kind remarks. Best wishes, Keith
Date: 12/16/2015 7:08:00 AM
Goosebumps lasted a long time, Keith. You held my interest from beginning to bitter end. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 12/16/2015 10:56:00 AM
Thanks Lin! much appreciated... Best wishes, Keith
Date: 12/16/2015 6:01:00 AM
- Enjoy reading this, a great story / poem, Keith - Congrats !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/16/2015 11:02:00 AM
Thanks Anne! I am most grateful for your kind remarks. Keith
Date: 12/14/2015 10:32:00 PM
This is poetry my friend. I never saw that ending coming but after reading it , realized if his love for his sweet Mary was matched-her leap was fated! A7 Adding this gem to my fav list my friend. Thanks
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/15/2015 4:31:00 AM
What a delightful compliment! Thanks so much for stopping by... Best wishes, Keith
Date: 12/14/2015 11:53:00 AM
sorrow's journey is dreadful indeed....everyone searches for a way to be freed....the widow's grief brought an end to her Life....great is the pressure to evolve as a wife....nice write keith....
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/14/2015 1:41:00 PM
Thanks for the rhyming response! Best wishes, Keith
Date: 12/14/2015 9:30:00 AM
such an interesting story with a surprise in the end, keith..epic!..huggs
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/14/2015 5:48:00 PM
Thanks nette! much obliged. Best wishes, Keith

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