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Why Would You Not Dare

The swirling clouds in endless motion are a sharp reminder, like an unsewn tear, as to the reason, the wondering of why you would not dare. The memories flood me, I cannot breathe; I gasp for air; anything; still; you are all I see. Like a weeping willow gently blowing in the wind, I am still standing tall, through tears streaming down my chin. You are so close, yet so very far; too scared to make a move; you want so much to touch me; yet you choose to remain aloof; why would you not dare. I have given you my heart, my trust my innermost thoughts, yet sadly, we continue to drift further apart; why would you not dare. To let go, would be to let go of us; these words are what we solemly vowed; with truth and with love, to always share; why would you not dare. How do we keep us blossoming when we lead two seperate lives; I will fight for us both; please take your hand in mine. Why would you not dare.

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Date: 8/17/2017 12:31:00 PM
Wow; I really like this heartfelt poem -JT
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Date: 4/3/2017 3:21:00 PM
Lynn. This is really nice. Too bad it is not a new poem for you to use in that Dare contest! (I am not sure what that judge wants from us but at least this poem uses the word Dare in it). By the way, have I not faved you as a poet? I will check that out right now and click on you if I never did it yet. You sure deserve it.
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Date: 3/26/2017 11:51:00 AM
In a case such as this, there is a need to open up more to each other....dialogue...putting all the cards on the table. Perhaps they are much closer than they realize! Regards // paul
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Date: 10/12/2016 7:03:00 AM
Sad emotions, its not easy to lose someone just because they are scared to try. Then again, it takes two to make a relationship, so perhaps she should make sure he knows how she feels about him.
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