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Why Tonight

Why tonight? Of all nights, knitted carefully by the slenderest of hands, To form into a year, that springs into decades and centuries And into a future with both of us gone – Of all nights, that I have lain awake, asleep, disturbed, in love – Why tonight? Of all nights, why this night – when the moon shows nothing but its fullness And bareness and disguise? Why tonight? Of all people, completing the billionth count, filling the shards of this planet we pity to call continents – Why you?

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Date: 11/29/2015 10:14:00 PM
Hanna, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Hanna Mae Mata
Date: 11/30/2015 4:53:00 AM
Hi Linda! You are so sweet! Thank you. I will definitely enjoy here. thanks for having me ;)
Date: 11/27/2015 10:32:00 AM
Hi Hanna, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Hanna Mae Mata
Date: 11/28/2015 8:18:00 AM
Thank you Pandita! Im so happy to be here! Hoping to hear more of your comments for my write-ups! xoxo
Date: 11/27/2015 12:35:00 AM
Hanna,, , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Hanna Mae Mata
Date: 11/27/2015 6:03:00 AM
thank you very much! Id love to be your friend too! :) So excited!

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